is a knot
to be untangled
blindfold, submerged
in water
a lock to pick, a box
to splinter
only to climb
into a new one, and seal it
even tighter
just wanted to share this cause i thought i was really clever when i wrote it, i won't lie.
3WW, The Final Chapter (and Week No. 538)
6 years ago
Nice image. I'm curious about the brackets around the title. Is that to suggest the box? Square brackets might work better if that's the case.
ReplyDeletethat's an interesting thought... it was just an impulse, really. the title is just so...unmystical. it's like the poem is filed under the title. i didn't really know how to solve that problem.
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