Sunday, October 11, 2009

Body of Work

Where is it done?
Is it located in the nerves,
in the back,
in the strength of the thigh
to walk and climb and do
whatever is necessary?

Probably the shoulders
are the seat of the Will
at its most godly--
the origin
of the muscles of embrace,
shoring up all things.



for read write poem

5 comments:

  1. Elegant simplicity of the body expressed. One can feel the trace of word right to or towards, finding home in 'strong embrace', a sort of calm and quiet Atlas here. Very very nice! Thank you for sharing this.

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  2. :)
    thanks for all your nice feedback this week.

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  3. Man, I really like how you tied that all together at the end. It flows logically and emotionally.

    Bravo!

    mark
    http://radio-nowhere.org/nb/

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  4. Wow. Short, but containing much meaning in its arms. I enjoyed the read.

    -Nicole

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  5. there is an elegance in this. good one!

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