Friday, October 9, 2009

Doctor's Office Diagrams IV

I always conceived
the uterus
to be huge,

also the heart.

Each, I am told,
about the size
of a fist.



for read write poem
yeah a bit slapdash and probably been said before, sorry about that. gotta keep on truckin'.
Posted by Rachel Erstwhilely at 11:20 PM
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4 comments:

  1. Jim MurdochOctober 10, 2009 at 1:53 AM

    Maybe this has been said before but this is concise, tight, effective.

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  2. Rachel ErstwhilelyOctober 10, 2009 at 9:54 AM

    if one can't be enthralling, one should at least be brief. ;)

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  3. Mommy GallowayOctober 14, 2009 at 7:02 AM

    I like it. Deep in content.

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  4. AnonymousOctober 15, 2009 at 5:26 PM

    i really like this one. we do think of those things as large. all. everything. encompassing. and they are as small as you say. a great perspective for a poem!

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